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Post by Jeri Cherry on Jan 28, 2011 16:39:33 GMT -8
Alright. So, I've made this banner a long time ago and I want to know what could've been improved on, and what I should have changed. It's not the best, so please give me your opinions.
As you can see, I'm not an artist for a reason. 
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Post by Amber on Jan 28, 2011 17:45:57 GMT -8
Hm... Cant say I like it... and not because its bad, because its not.
However:
He looks to crowded in that little space.
And (Although I know this isnt on you... its on the stock..) His head is angled funny. He just looks awkward.
I will say I love the background... just not how he sits inside of it.
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Post by Jeri Cherry on Jan 28, 2011 17:48:46 GMT -8
Hm... Cant say I like it... and not because its bad, because its not. However: He looks to crowded in that little space. And (Although I know this isnt on you... its on the stock..) His head is angled funny. He just looks awkward. I will say I love the background... just not how he sits inside of it.
I do agree; he does look kinda awkward inside the cave. However, the angle he's coming in is how I needed him to come in. Not sure if that makes any sense...
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Post by Amber on Jan 28, 2011 18:00:53 GMT -8
I understand. You needed him to come in at that angle, but it is hard to force an image to look right when you play with the angles XD I had that problem with Naya's Minap (Thus me turning in the header.. and not the minap yet ^^)
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Post by Dyzzie on Jan 28, 2011 19:25:52 GMT -8
The lightning is... off. I understand the wolf is in the shadow, but with the direction the light is on his left side, and especially around his rear (which is closer to the light source) should have a sort of highlight, it'll help with blending him in more. The angle is a tad awkward, I agree with that, but just by smudging the edges of his fur, making him appear a more fuller, or even playing with the angle with the move tool (if you have PS). Other than that, I think it's pretty good...
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Post by Jeri Cherry on Jan 28, 2011 19:31:52 GMT -8
The lightning is... off. I understand the wolf is in the shadow, but with the direction the light is on his left side, and especially around his rear (which is closer to the light source) should have a sort of highlight, it'll help with blending him in more. The angle is a tad awkward, I agree with that, but just by smudging the edges of his fur, making him appear a more fuller, or even playing with the angle with the move tool (if you have PS). Other than that, I think it's pretty good...
You know, now that you mention it, the lighting does look off. I did smudge his fur, but I guess not enough...
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